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ArticleBMJ open2025

Readability and complexity of written information presented to hospitalised patients for trial consent during the COVID-19 pandemic in the UK: a retrospective document analysis.

Ewan Gourlay, Tim Felton, Mona Bafadhel, Christopher E Brightling, Jane C Davies, Rachael A Evans, Ling Pei Ho, Stefan J Marciniak, Nick A Maskell, Joanna Porter and 5 more

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5 · Who and what money

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15 authors.

Ewan GourlayNorth West Lung Centre, Manchester University NHS Foundation Trust, Manchester, UK ewangourlay@nhs.net.ORCID http://orcid.org/0000-0002-0905-8247
Tim FeltonDivision of Immunology, Immunity to Infection and Respiratory Medicine, The University of Manchester, Manchester, UK.
Mona BafadhelKing's Centre for Lung Health, King's College London, London, UK.
Christopher E BrightlingInstitute of Lung Health, University of Leicester, Leicester, UK.
Jane C DaviesGene Therapy, Imperial College, London, UK.
Rachael A EvansUniversity of Leicester, Leicester, UK.ORCID http://orcid.org/0000-0002-1667-868X
Ling Pei HoMRC Human Immunology Unit, Weatherall Institute of Molecular Medicine, Oxford, UK.
Stefan J MarciniakMedicine, University of Cambridge, Cambridge, UK.ORCID http://orcid.org/0000-0001-8472-7183
Nick A MaskellNorth Bristol Lung Centre, Southmead Hospital, Bristol, UK.
Joanna PorterCentre for Inflammation & Tissue Repair, University College London Division of Medicine, London, UK.
Elizabeth SapeyInstitute of Inflammation and Ageing, University of Birmingham, Birmingham, UK.ORCID http://orcid.org/0000-0003-3454-5482
Salman SiddiquiNational Heart and Lung Institute, Imperial College London, London, UK.
Samantha WalkerResearch & Innovation, Asthma & Lung UK, London, UK.ORCID http://orcid.org/0000-0001-5503-8258
Tom WilkinsonClinical and Experimental Medicine, University of Southampton, Southampton, UK.
Alex Robert HorsleyDivision of Immunology, Immunity to Infection and Respiratory Medicine, The University of Manchester, Manchester, UK.ORCID http://orcid.org/0000-0003-1828-0058

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6 · The paper itself

Abstract

objectivesPatient information sheets (PISs) and informed consent forms (ICFs) are essential tools to communicate and document informed consent for clinical trial participation. These documents need to be easily understandable, especially when used to take informed consent from acutely unwell patients. Health literacy guidance recommends written information should be at a level between reading ages 9-11. We aimed to assess the readability and complexity of PISs/ICFs used for clinical trials of acute therapies during the COVID-19 pandemic.

designRetrospective document analysis.

settingPISs/ICFs used in trials involving pharmaceutical interventions recruiting hospitalised patients with COVID-19 during the first year of the pandemic were sourced from hospitals across the UK. PRIMARY AND SECONDARY OUTCOME MEASURES: PISs/ICFs were assessed for length, approximate reading time and subsection content. Readability and language complexity were assessed using Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level (FKGL) (range 1-18; higher is more complex), Gunning-Fog (GFOG) (range 1-20; higher is more complex) and Flesch Reading Ease Score (FRES) (range 0-100; below 60 is 'difficult' for comprehension).

results13 documents were analysed with a median length of 5139 words (range 1559-7026), equating to a median reading time of 21.4 min (range 6.5-29.3 min) at 240 words per minute. Median FKGL was 9.8 (9.1-10.8), GFOG 11.8 (10.4-13) and FRES was 54.6 (47.0-58.3). All documents were classified as 'difficult' for comprehension and had a reading age of 14 years old or higher.

conclusionsAll PISs/ICFs analysed contained literary complexity beyond both recommendations and the reading level of many in the UK population. Researchers should seek to improve communications to improve trial volunteer comprehension and recruitment.

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Clinical Trials as TopicComprehensionConsent FormsCOVID-19Health LiteracyInformed ConsentDocument AnalysisHospitalizationHumansPandemicsReadingRetrospective StudiesSARS-CoV-2United KingdomClinical TrialCOVID-19Lung DiseasesMEDICAL ETHICS

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PMCPMC11931889

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