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ArticleSurgical endoscopy2023

Readability of patient education materials for bariatric surgery.

Adam Timothy Lucy, Stephanie L Rakestraw, Courtney Stringer, Daniel Chu, Jayleen Grams, Richard Stahl, Margaux N Mustian

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Article in Surgical endoscopy, 2023. The graph could read no effect estimate from its abstract, so it casts no vote on the map. Cited by 15 papers.

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15citing papers in PubMed
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3 · Its place in the literature

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15 citing papers in PubMed, 21 citations in OpenAlex.

  1. Patient Educational Materials for Pheochromocytoma Exceed Recommended Readability Level: An Analysis Across Three Independent Reading Instruments.Journal of cancer education : the official journal of the American Association for Cancer Education · 2026
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  2. Evaluation of Readability in Patient Education Materials for Primary Hyperparathyroidism.Journal of cancer education : the official journal of the American Association for Cancer Education · 2026
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7 authors at 2 institutions in 1 country.

Adam Timothy LucyDepartment of Surgery, University of Alabama at Birmingham (UAB) Heersink School of Medicine, 1808 7th Ave South, BDB 505, Birmingham, AL, 35233, USA. alucy@uabmc.edu.ORCID http://orcid.org/0000-0002-1961-8447
Stephanie L RakestrawDepartment of Surgery, University of Alabama at Birmingham (UAB) Heersink School of Medicine, 1808 7th Ave South, BDB 505, Birmingham, AL, 35233, USA.
Courtney StringerDepartment of Surgery, University of Alabama at Birmingham (UAB) Heersink School of Medicine, 1808 7th Ave South, BDB 505, Birmingham, AL, 35233, USA.
Daniel ChuDepartment of Surgery, University of Alabama at Birmingham (UAB) Heersink School of Medicine, 1808 7th Ave South, BDB 505, Birmingham, AL, 35233, USA.
Jayleen GramsDepartment of Surgery, University of Alabama at Birmingham (UAB) Heersink School of Medicine, 1808 7th Ave South, BDB 505, Birmingham, AL, 35233, USA.
Richard StahlDepartment of Surgery, University of Alabama at Birmingham (UAB) Heersink School of Medicine, 1808 7th Ave South, BDB 505, Birmingham, AL, 35233, USA.
Margaux N MustianDepartment of Surgery, University of Alabama at Birmingham (UAB) Heersink School of Medicine, 1808 7th Ave South, BDB 505, Birmingham, AL, 35233, USA.
University of Alabama at Birmingham · USUniversity of Alabama at Birmingham Hospital · US

Funding

UAB K12 in Patient Centered Outcomes ResearchK12HS023009 · AHRQ · UNIVERSITY OF ALABAMA AT BIRMINGHAM · PI SAAG, KENNETH G · 2014 to 2018
$4.0M
Deep South KUH Premier Research - Interdisciplinary Mentored Education (PRIME) Training CoreTL1DK139566 · NIDDK · UNIVERSITY OF ALABAMA AT BIRMINGHAM · PI DAVID M POLLOCK · 2023 to 2026
$3.6M
Designing a Plan of Action for Better Access and Quality of Surgery for African-Americans with Gastrointestinal Cancers in the Deep SouthR01MD013858 · NIMHD · UNIVERSITY OF ALABAMA AT BIRMINGHAM · PI CHU, DANIEL I, PISU, MARIA · 2020 to 2024
$3.0M
Deep South KUH Premier Research- Interdisciplinary Mentored Education (PRIME) Networking CoreU2CDK133422 · NIDDK · UNIVERSITY OF ALABAMA AT BIRMINGHAM · PI Kelly Hyndman · 2023 to 2026
$2.8M
Enhancing Health Literacy in Surgery (EHLIS) to Eliminate Surgical Disparities for African-Americans with Inflammatory Bowel Disease (IBD)K23MD013903 · NIMHD · UNIVERSITY OF ALABAMA AT BIRMINGHAM · PI CHU, DANIEL I · 2019 to 2021
$434k
AHRQ HHS K12 HS023009NIDDK NIH HHS TL1 DK139566NIDDK NIH HHS U2C DK133422NIMHD NIH HHS K23 MD013903NIMHD NIH HHS R01 MD013858
6 · The paper itself

Abstract

introductionBariatric surgery is a successful treatment for obesity, but barriers to surgery exist, including low health literacy. National organizations recommend patient education materials (PEM) not exceed a sixth-grade reading level. Difficult to comprehend PEM can exacerbate barriers to bariatric surgery, especially in the Deep South where high obesity and low literacy rates exist. This study aimed to assess and compare the readability of webpages and electronic medical record (EMR) bariatric surgery PEM from one institution.

methodsReadability of online bariatric surgery and standardized perioperative EMR PEM were analyzed and compared. Text readability was assessed by validated instruments: Flesch Reading Ease Formula (FRE), Flesch Kincaid Grade Level (FKGL), Gunning Fog (GF), Coleman-Liau Index (CL), Simple Measure of Gobbledygook (SMOG), Automated Readability Index (ARI), and Linsear Write Formula (LWF). Mean readability scores were calculated with standard deviations and compared using unpaired t-tests.

results32 webpages and seven EMR education documents were analyzed. Webpages were overall "difficult to read" compared to "standard/average" readability EMR materials (mean FRE 50.5 ± 18.3 vs. 67.4 ± 4.2, p = 0.023). All webpages were at or above high school reading level: mean FKGL 11.8 ± 4.4, GF 14.0 ± 3.9, CL 9.5 ± 3.2, SMOG 11.0 ± 3.2, ARI 11.7 ± 5.1, and LWF 14.9 ± 6.6. Webpages with highest reading levels were nutrition information and lowest were patient testimonials. EMR materials were sixth to ninth grade reading level: FKGL 6.2 ± 0.8, GF 9.3 ± 1.4, CL 9.7 ± 0.9, SMOG 7.1 ± 0.8, ARI 6.1 ± 1.0, and LWF 5.9 ± 0.8.

conclusionSurgeon curated bariatric surgery webpages have advanced reading levels above recommended thresholds compared to standardized PEM from an EMR. This readability gap may unintentionally contribute to barriers to surgery and affect postoperative outcomes. Streamlined efforts are needed to create materials that are easier to read and comply with recommendations.

Indexed as

Bariatric SurgeryHealth LiteracyComprehensionHumansInternetObesityPatient Education as TopicSmogSmogBariatric surgeryHealth literacyObesityReadability

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