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ArticleFrontiers in psychology2021

Better Writing in Scientific Publications Builds Reader Confidence and Understanding.

Ren Ryba, Zoë A Doubleday, Matthew J Dry, Carolyn Semmler, Sean D Connell

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Article in Frontiers in psychology, 2021. The graph could read no effect estimate from its abstract, so it casts no vote on the map. Cited by 8 papers.

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1 · What the graph read from it

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The abstract states no effect estimate the extractor could read, or names no intervention and outcome on the map, so this paper lights no cell and moves no belief. It is still indexed, cited and linked below.

2 · The registry

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3 · Its place in the literature

Who cites it

8 citing papers in PubMed.

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  4. "I" versus "the author": The power of first-person voice when writing about science.Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences of the United States of America · 2024
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4 · The record

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5 · Who and what money

Authors and funding

5 authors.

Ren RybaSouthern Seas Ecology Laboratories, School of Biological Sciences, The University of Adelaide, Adelaide, SA, Australia.
Zoë A DoubledayFuture Industries Institute, The University of South Australia, Mawson Lakes, SA, Australia.
Matthew J DrySchool of Psychology, The University of Adelaide, Adelaide, SA, Australia.
Carolyn SemmlerSchool of Psychology, The University of Adelaide, Adelaide, SA, Australia.
Sean D ConnellSouthern Seas Ecology Laboratories, School of Biological Sciences, The University of Adelaide, Adelaide, SA, Australia.

Funding

No grant is acknowledged in the PubMed record.

6 · The paper itself

Abstract

Scientific publications are the building blocks of discovery and collaboration, but their impact is limited by the style in which they are traditionally written. Recently, many authors have called for a switch to an engaging, accessible writing style. Here, we experimentally test how readers respond to such a style. We hypothesized that scientific abstracts written in a more accessible style would improve readers' reported readability and confidence as well as their understanding, assessed using multiple-choice questions on the content. We created a series of scientific abstracts, corresponding to real publications on three scientific topics at four levels of difficulty-varying from the difficult, traditional style to an engaging, accessible style. We gave these abstracts to a team of readers consisting of 170 third-year undergraduate students. Then, we posed questions to measure the readers' readability, confidence, and understanding with the content. The scientific abstracts written in a more accessible style resulted in higher readability, understanding, and confidence. These findings demonstrate that rethinking the way we communicate our science may empower a more collaborative and diverse industry.

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accessibilityconfidenceinterdisciplinarityreadabilityscientific writingtraditional styleunderstanding

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PMID34512473
PMCPMC8430246

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