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ArticleJournal of general internal medicine2021

Words Matter: What Do Patients Find Judgmental or Offensive in Outpatient Notes?

Leonor Fernández, Alan Fossa, Zhiyong Dong, Tom Delbanco, Joann Elmore, Patricia Fitzgerald, Kendall Harcourt, Jocelyn Perez, Jan Walker, Catherine DesRoches

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Article in Journal of general internal medicine, 2021. The graph could read no effect estimate from its abstract, so it casts no vote on the map. Cited by 58 papers.

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10 authors at 2 institutions in 1 country.

Leonor FernándezDepartment of Medicine, Beth Israel Deaconess Medical Center, 330 Brookline Avenue, Boston, MA, USA. Lfernan1@bidmc.harvard.edu.ORCID 0000-0002-2675-7533
Alan FossaDepartment of Medicine, Beth Israel Deaconess Medical Center, 330 Brookline Avenue, Boston, MA, USA.
Zhiyong DongDepartment of Medicine, Beth Israel Deaconess Medical Center, 330 Brookline Avenue, Boston, MA, USA.
Tom DelbancoDepartment of Medicine, Beth Israel Deaconess Medical Center, 330 Brookline Avenue, Boston, MA, USA.
Joann ElmoreDavid Geffen School of Medicine, University of California, Los Angeles, CA, USA.
Patricia FitzgeraldDepartment of Medicine, Beth Israel Deaconess Medical Center, 330 Brookline Avenue, Boston, MA, USA.
Kendall HarcourtDepartment of Medicine, Beth Israel Deaconess Medical Center, 330 Brookline Avenue, Boston, MA, USA.
Jocelyn PerezDepartment of Medicine, Beth Israel Deaconess Medical Center, 330 Brookline Avenue, Boston, MA, USA.
Jan WalkerDepartment of Medicine, Beth Israel Deaconess Medical Center, 330 Brookline Avenue, Boston, MA, USA.
Catherine DesRochesDepartment of Medicine, Beth Israel Deaconess Medical Center, 330 Brookline Avenue, Boston, MA, USA.
Beth Israel Deaconess Medical Center · USUniversity of California, Los Angeles · US

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6 · The paper itself

Abstract

backgroundSharing outpatient notes with patients may bring clinically important benefits, but notes may sometimes cause patients to feel judged or offended, and thereby reduce trust.

objectiveAs part of a larger survey examining the effects of open notes, we sought to understand how many patients feel judged or offended due to something they read in outpatient notes, and why.

designWe analyzed responses from a large Internet survey of adult patients who used secure patient portals and had at least 1 visit note available in a 12-month period at 2 large academic medical systems in Boston and Seattle, and in a rural integrated health system in Pennsylvania.

participantsAdult ambulatory patients with portal accounts in health systems that offered open notes for up to 7 years. APPROACH: (1) Quantitative analysis of 2 dichotomous questions, and (2) qualitative thematic analysis of free-text responses on what patients found judgmental or offensive. KEY

resultsAmong 22,959 patient respondents who had read at least one note and answered the 2 questions, 2,411 (10.5%) reported feeling judged and/or offended by something they read in their note(s). Patients who reported poor health, unemployment, or inability to work were more likely to feel judged or offended. Among the 2,411 patients who felt judged and/or offended, 2,137 (84.5%) wrote about what prompted their feelings. Three thematic domains emerged: (1) errors and surprises, (2) labeling, and (3) disrespect.

conclusionsOne in 10 respondents reported feeling judged/offended by something they read in an outpatient note due to the perception that it contained errors, surprises, labeling, or evidence of disrespect. The content and tone may be particularly important to patients in poor health. Enhanced clinician awareness of the patient perspective may promote an improved medical lexicon, reduce the transmission of bias to other clinicians, and reinforce healing relationships.

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OutpatientsPatient PortalsAdultElectronic Health RecordsHumansPennsylvaniaSurveys and Questionnairesbiashealth information transparencylanguagepatient-doctor relationshiptrust

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PMID33528782
PMCPMC8390578
OpenAlexW3126626515

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